You Take My Breath Away
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You take my breath away...
You take my breath away...
Your peaceful aura,
Drew me in.
Then your voice,
Made my head spin.
Your essence has,
That sweet allure.
I've come to see,
Your thoughts are pure.
You take my breath away...
Like a dog and his bark,
Like a goblin after dark.
Like going to the moon,
Or leaving you too soon...
You take my breath away...
I love your curves.
I love your lines.
You're the perfect blend,
Of all the wines.
You take my breath away...
You know your lips,
Are brandywine.
Your finger tips,
Can change my mind.
You take my breath away...
Your hands are charms,
At the ends of your arms.
You take my breath away...
Like a wave,
At its crest,
Like a baby,
To the mother's breast...
You take my breath away...
Like a canyon,
They call Grand,
Like a bird,
Eating from my hand...
You take my breath away...
Your loving eyes,
Break my disguise.
At your feet,
Let me sleep,
On a cold,
Winter night.
I won't,
Make a peep,
Till dawn's,
Bright light.
Because...you... take my breath away...
There is no task,
That I won't do,
To breathe this vapor,
That is you.
Because...you... take my breath away...
My love will last,
Till the end of time,
Cause like a hill,
Too steep to climb,
You take my breath away!
You... take...
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Thank you KewlWriter! I bet U R Kewl!!! God bless!
You take my breath away by those beautiful lines! I wish I can write this good!
Oh Freya! You are perfect my Dear! You are so wise beyond you years. You're wise beyond my years. God bless you Dear Freya!
Awesome Mick, now my favorite one that you've done.
Wow...wonder when someone is going to write me a poem like this...It is beautiful, Micky.
There is this one minor detail...I want a particular someone to write me a poem like this...[I can dream, Micky, can't I?]
Yo Ralwus!!! God bless you Son! I'll come over and give you a poke!
Msorensson!!! You deserve all the finest! I need to study you just a bit more. I believe you wore a Hawaiian grass skirt didn't you? For a while? Anyway- God bless you Girl!
Sweet poem, hope your lady liked it.
Like an after dinner mint,
at a garlic eating contest,
You take my breath away,
that's why I love you best.
Just kidding, your poem is sweet, although I was thrown by the alien picture in the end. She must really rock your universe!
This is imagination Ginger Meow. I can love women a lot better through these keys than I can in real life I guess. Can't remember actually. Seems like there were a lot of good, wonderful, and beautiful parts.
I can imagine. God bless Ginger Meow!
Michael Dear;
you play so well, you sweep me of my feet. If only others could play so well, those who need to switch gears, to loving instead of hating!
I love to play
in your backyard any day
in your tree house
each and every day
to sit with you
on your porch
feeding the birds each morn
I would never be forlorn
Mickey Dee you play so well
You keep me in your spell!
So long as you come out to play
I will to your backyard
run to play!
Our imaginations are such a beautiful thing
if only more people would use theirs.
After all is it not how things come into reality!
Come on people, come out to play! :D
Mickey has such a great backyard :D the view from
here is absolutely wonderful, from there it would be
even better. Anyway, I imagine it would! ha I love you MD I did push all those buttons :D ha ha
Without imagination...there would be no love. Pretty nice Micky Dee!
Thank you Micky for a beautiful and macnanimus poem, really out standing. Thank you for sharing. Godspeed. creativeone59
Sa'ge, you wonderful child!
Please come play!
Today.
Run over here.
We'll watch the deer.
The birds will fly.
The squirrels will drop by.
If you will do the Hula,
I will find some moolah,
We'll have ice-cream,
Hold hands and dream.
Jane Bovary! There could be no love without imagination. Thank you Dear Jane!
There's the Creativeone! God bless you Faye. I hope you have some encouragement today. I'll drop by.
This is absolutely beautiful, Micky! "You're the perfect blend of all the wines" has to be my favorite line...
Thanks for such a lovely read!
A beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing Micky.
Yo Marine,
"Wow, u r Good" No, let me rephrase this, "U R VERY GOOD"!
semper fi.....
keep going.....
Brother you're good, I know I say this every time I comment but the combination of beautiful words with beautiful photos...takes my breath away!! Peace Bro!! Tom
Nice poem and inspirational pictures to go with it too. The pictures carried me away in my mind as I was looking at them and pretty words too.
Beautiful and so sweet, my uncle. I don't have any word to say. I love to see all the pictures. You always come up with something special for us. You made my day so bright and want me to smile on you. Let me vote this up. Cheers....
Mic, this work suites you well, I find it quite refreshing, Peace, dusty
Beautiful pictures, beautiful words. The last two were perfect: ... You... take... (indeed my breath away). You provoke emotions in a unique way! Voted UP and UP.
lorlie- I bet you're the perfect blend of all the wines too.
Hummingbird, thank you for flying by.
Yo Brother Matt! Let's keep the faith and Semper Fi!
Yo Brother Justom! You are so kind. I'll come see you soon!
BobbiRant Dear! You ladies draw "magic" like this out of mud like me. It's all you ladies.
Yo Nephew Prasetio! I know you have something beautiful going on over at your place. I'll come see you soon. God bless you Prasetio!
Yo yo yo! 50 Caliber Dude! Thank you sir. I think the warmest memories bring about words like this.
Marti!!! I am so glad you liked this. I'm glad you took that last line. That's kind of how it "floated out".
You know- I see this sa a song. But I see "you take my breath away" being said twice not once. I think reading, especially out loud, once is best. I just "see" something- you know. God bless!
Hi, Micky, you're poetry is so good and I love the pictures, another great one. I remember these times so well in my past, I think I had better get my best clothes on and make a few more memories! Aha! cheers Nell
Very beautiful words Micky and the pictures are perfect.
To have someone who takes your breath away
Is like a romantic holiday
Foot prints on the sandy beach
Your lover within arms length
Swimming in the bright moon light
Cuddling close throughout the night
This is what God intended
It,s a wonderful story-book ending
You make some memories Nell. You should have sweet dreams and memories. Nell- you know that these words and more belong to you!
Dear Always Exploring and Always on my mind,
Look about.
There's no doubt.
You'll find.
You're as pretty as the first snow drift.
And thank you for your gift,
of poem.
So good it took MY breath away. Micky , where have you been hiding this side of you? Absolutely beautiful. love, Dim xx
My oh my Dim! I sure love you Girl. God bless you my Dear!
You know - you could team up with a music-songwriter to put those lyrics to music and have a hit on your hands!!
Yo Nellieanna! It's so good to see you. I'm coming to read your poems right now. You know Nell I have the tune in my head. I do. Thank you Ma'am!
Micky Dee, poet laureate and romantic... you take my breath away!
No K! You take my breath away!
Beautiful poetry and picture #3 I will one day capture or close, I never have a camera with me when I see something close to that, but now I carry it every day just in case. I have a cloud picture now I took unlike anything I have seen and waiting for my son to teach me how to water mark it, it looks like I took it from a plane which I have never been in. Too bad you didn't go to Charles Towne Landing while you were so near it, especially if you have never been, it can't be more than twenty minutes from Charleston, with 22 acres I think it said of bike trails. So gorgeous.
Polly- I think I need to go back to your Charles Towne hub. I meant to comment there but was in a hurry and meant to go back. I was there decades ago, but I lived in Charleston two years ago. My favorite spot might be the Angel Oak! Thank you Ma'am!
I love red wine and am all to happy to blend, mix and appreciate all the perfection in all. You romantic devil you. Love LOVE is a wonderful thing and your expression in art is moving and inspiring. Peace :)
Well Katie! You take...
You have the heart and soul of a romantic poet and it shines through very brightly in these silken words that seemingly glide across the page (computer screen) right into our hearts. This would be wonderful printed and bound into a book to be perused over and over again along with the well chosen photos. Buttons away!!!
Yo Peggy! I knew you'd love this. It could be written to you by your hubby. I know he thinks it!
Hope so. He's a keeper! :-)
You are too Peggy! You are TOO!
You were right, but I love everything you do! I would love to see you recite some in a poetry Slam! They have a great one twice a year at the Lake Eden Arts Festival (LEAF) at Camp Rockmont, Black mtn.
Thank you Brynda. I think I'm too shy. I'm pretty introverted. Thank you Brynda. I love you Dear! I really mean that!
love the cadence of this piece. reminds me of my favorite quote "life is not about home many breaths you take, but how many things take your breath away" lovely still. thank you for writing your version. lvh
Brother Micky - hey man, you sure do tell it good! I loved this one. Keep writing brother, you light up our lives and take our breaths away - always!
Love and peace
Tony
WritinginAlaska! "life is not about how many breaths you take, but how many things take your breath away"- ain't that purty! It really is my Dear! It seems I remember that quote- but alas, I have magnesia. Milk of magnesia I think! God bless!
Brother Man Tony! I'd better hurry on over to your place and see what's up! I love you Tony!
Lovely.! absolutely beautiful.! :)
Oh thank you very much noorenaz! God bless you Dear!
Micky, I do n't know how you always find the just the right pictures/photos to go with your poetic words, but you do. The words and images here go together perfectly.
Hi 2uesday! Thank you Ma'am. God bless you 2uesday! I'll come see you soon!
Such a beautiful poem. You really do have the gift of breathing life into your words. I am bookmarking this one under 'my favourite poems.'Words and pics blend together. Take care Micky.
Eiddwen!
I am so pleased that you found then nice. God bless you! I'm coming to see you soon! Like now! Bless you Dear!
...well Mister Sir Dee of Mickey - this is the reason why I am a beautiful mess - I would love to frame this hub and hang it up in the art gallery of my mind - it is one of the most lovely hubs I have ever seen - outside of my own magnum opus hubs - of course - lol lol
..and yes you do continue to take our breaths away with your artistry, unselfishness, kindness, wit, and good fellowship -you are all of the good things that hubpages has to offer - and you have enough sense and good taste to check me out at the same time ......lol
Epigramman is the KING of rapid fire!
KING of rapid verse of humor and desire.
And of course before your comment is done,
He's already written another one!
....I am a machine .... covered with flesh - and concealing much heart and soul! lol - Thanks as always for your support and encouragement ...and yes I'm still a beautiful mess!!!
Oh yes!
He will address,
and whole-heartedly confess,
that our epigramman that we love dear,
is a FINE & BEAUTIFUL MESS!
....now everyone at hubpages join together in a lavish MGM musical production number -"THAT'S OUR EPIGRAMMAN THAT WE LOVE DEAR , HE'S FINE, AND BEAUTIFUL AND OH SO QUEER!!!!"
(no not that queer!) lol
You have cracked up! See what you get when your rhyme so fast?
epigramman's epitaph,
was short and sweet.
For St. Peter,
he was to meet.
St. Peter said, "Epi Son,
why aren't you on time?"
Epi Man said, "St. Peter Dude!
I was writing another rhyme."
St. Peter said, "Epi,
You're still warm beneath the sod,
But you'd better explain this to God."
Dear God, "said Epi,
I wasn't disrespectful.
Unless I share a rhyme,
I feel I'm neglectful.
You see Dear Lord,
some of us love one another,
We show our compassion,
as we help one another.
I write a smile,
and toss it high.
And soon it's written,
in the clear blue sky."
God said ,"Epi,
"You are needed,
down there.
But in return,
I want your hair."
Epi said "God,
I guess that's fair.
And I don't care,
if my head is bare.
And thank you God,
for your love and grace,
and getting a glimpse,
of your majestic face,
And I hate to run,
at this ridiculous pace,
But could someone drop me,
at Micky Dee's place?"
God said, "sure Epi,
we'll take you there below,
and please tell the rest,
of the hubbers hello!"
....well take this advice from the master of disaster - and the mess who must confess: Mister Dee Sir of Royal Mickey - you rhyme sublime!!!
Epigramman, my Brother Man,
If you were not you,
Could I take keyboard in hand,
And write a poem that would do?
Epi Man,
You inspire,
And for all of us here -
YOU LIGHT OUR FIRE!
I would not mind watching and listening
to the both of you in a poetry slam!
it would indeed be grand!
but five lines at a time
keeping things in line.
short and sweet
back and forth to the beat.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZKYKNZvQ6Jc&feature
aloha oe
Oh Sa'ge- Epi would kick my butt like a football! Nice epigram!
Céline Dion - Taking Chances is pretty good!
I'm just blown away..that's so beautiful and sweet. Lovely pictures, too. hmmm can I use the eclipse one for my next hub series??? ;) Thanks I know you won't say no :)
YoBlaise! God bless you Dear! You take what you'd like my Dear! I'll come over to see what's new at your place!
Very passionate... and romantic. The images enhanced its message even more! I adore this poetry of yours my friend! Voted up! =)
Oh God bless you DjBryle! I'll come by and see "whutup"!
This Hub brought tears to my eyes! Absolutely awesome! Wow! You touched my very soul - thank you!
Aw Goldie! Now you've touched mine. God bless and thank you Dear!
Wow! This is so beautiful! You really took my breath away with the poem and images!
Rated up and beautiful!
Thank you you Jill! I am so pleased!
Wow! so pure, so simple, I wish most could see life this way ..Sometimes it is like a breath of fresh air to see such joy, to be able to abandon yourself in the pure joy of love!! Thank you Micky Dee for sharing this.
Thank you sofs! Thank you for stopping by!
Wonderful words Micky. Thanks for sharing these beautiful thoughts. They remind me of my wife and I'm very much looking forward to seeing her again after a lengthy time apart. She is in her home country and I hope that I will see her again before the end of this year. Cheers Micky and God bless you!
God bless you back Rich. God bless you back! I hope you're reunited with a greater love than ever!
Best poem I read in a long time
You could take my breath away...
Very erotic!!
I have some love poems too:
Pure Attraction
The Jewel Within Your Hand
etc
By Blondey:
Starting to forget
Broken Heart
Hey school girl! I'll be checking those out. Yoiu are a great writer!
KewlWriter 20 months ago
Nice poem for a loved on.