You Thought Of Me

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By Micky Dee

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You thought of me,

I could feel it.

The tears down our cheeks,

Would seal it.

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You thought of me.

And, no-one knows.

And I can’t stop,

This love that grows.

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You thought of me.

The world has us apart.

And, no-one sees,

The broken heart.

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You thought of me.

Others will dispense it.

But my heart and eyes,

Could sense it.

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You thought of me.

Many will deny,

That I could feel you,

As you would cry.

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You thought of me,

From a world away.

And I’ll continue to love you,

To my dying day.

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You thought of me,

And I of you.

You thought of me,

And I cried too.

.

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~Micky Dee~

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Comments

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prettyunicorn 8 months ago

Wow.

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QudsiaP1 Level 5 Commenter 8 months ago

To think and reminisce in the memories of the beloved are something that every being indulges in but to admit to it, takes sheer strength.

Beautifully crafted.

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drbj Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

I do love your sweet side, Micky. On second thought, I do believe both of your sides are sweet. :)

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mckbirdbks Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Nicely done Mickey.

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Rosemay50 Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Aw lovers torn apart, separated by oceans. So sad and emotioal.

Want a tissue dear?

Seriously this is simply beautiful and hesrt wrenching Micky. I loved it.

voted up

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PETER LUMETTA Level 6 Commenter 8 months ago

Sometimes we need to be soft and vulnerable, Beautiful Mick,

Peter

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Just Ask Susan Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Beautiful poem.

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anupma 8 months ago

What a beautiful love poem! in a few words, you express a lot. You depicts your feelings very well. It is true that only the lovers can feel the separation. Usually people say, everything will be alright very soon, certainly you will forget her/him. But it is very tough, in fact it is impossible. For some time it can remain in unconscious mind, but no one can forget it.

Beautiful line. I vote it as awesome.

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b. Malin Level 7 Commenter 8 months ago

How Beautiful and Sentimental Micky...It's such a touching Read.

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Hummingbird5356 Level 2 Commenter 8 months ago

A very beautiful poem Micky Dee.

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always exploring Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Very beautiful Micky...

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Mentalist acer Level 6 Commenter 8 months ago

Consciousness Grown,

From A Reassuring Unknown.;)

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MartieCoetser Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

It is wonderful to know we are in somebody's thoughts, and just as wonderful to have somebody special in our thoughts. Micky, you should write more poems like this :)))

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2uesday Level 6 Commenter 8 months ago

Lovely poetry, very nice to read.

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Amy Becherer Level 7 Commenter 8 months ago

Too beautiful for comment...stands on its own.

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Freya Cesare Level 4 Commenter 8 months ago

Oooooh.... This is mine! I wrote it in my mind and you stole it from me! (Oh, I wish! >.

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bellawritter23 Level 4 Commenter 8 months ago

This was very beautiful Micky Dee. I love the last verse especially.

"You thought of me,

And I of you.

You thought of me,

And I cried too."

Thanks for sharing such a gift.

smiles :)

bella

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Lady_Tenaz Level 5 Commenter 8 months ago

Oh how I have missed your poetry my friend....so beautiful!!

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Dim Flaxenwick Level 7 Commenter 8 months ago

OOOOH! Micky.!! How beautiful. It seemed to come from the depths of your soul. Gorgeous.xxx

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acaetnna Level 6 Commenter 8 months ago

Wow this is brilliant, truly lovely.

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drpastorcarlotta 8 months ago

WONDERFUL! I have missed you Mickey! God Bless you!!!

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PADDYBOY60 Level 5 Commenter 7 months ago

Thanks, and that is all I can say right now.

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